IT
I took a peek, that was all it took to set me free.
Nothing special, just a simple, innocent glance.
It towered over me..
No not 'it', for 'it' is way to cold for such a divine creation.
Neither he nor she for both way too flawed for 'it'
So for now lets use 'it', for no word is pure enough for me to brand 'it' with.
Create a word?! Oh how absurd to think us humble beings can overcome the pressure of creating a word great enough for 'it'.
Only a GOD is capable of such a thing.
PRAY? What world do you live in? Im no buddah to restrict my myself in a prayer hoping for enlightenment.
So for now, namless 'it' shall stay. But i sure hope that one day, you may be lucky enough to say, " 'it' set me free ".
16 comments:
oooooooofffffffff
ma9araat !!
heheh shot gun yoba :p
ok man
ur soooo climbing up a new level here
i not only likey but lovey
i read it three times because i melt everytime i reach the last line..
it is beautiful.
oh come on!
first no3ik
then u!
mafahamt shay 3ade;p?
no3ik: Tx =D inshala more to come .. mo akeed bes inshala =P
Yazeed: im assuming we're talkin about the poem writing :P i was bullied into it i swear =P
um-mit3ib: =P 3adi im still not sure what i was on when i wrote it =P
I liked this one more than the om 3ali one:P
Merci for the questionnaire thingie!
Shino No3ik 3adetek?!
Anyway it's a gift in the end and seems that u have it too ;)
do0da!? 6ala3t sha3ir min ta7at le ta7at? ;P Yah yah shal 7arakat. I really liked it. La2 9ij shay 3ajeeb.
Let "it" be your inspiration. ;)
Sweet :-D
'it' could be a green apple or a plate of balalee6, though.
Lovely, though. Pretty Shakespearean, what with the rhetorical questions and all.
You can tell heather would hate this comment, right? erm, because I'm trying to sound smart and what not? Okay shutting up ..
:-D
heeeeeeeey!! 7di dasha eb qowa!! mashallah mashallah! it is amazing!! indeed what is coming is smth unnamable, smth that challanges everything we had taken for granted.. smth new!! wooow i loved it!!
"But i sure hope that one day, you may be lucky enough to say, " 'it' set me free ".
beautiful line!! absolutely!!
keep it up man!!
im really impressed :D
u rightin poems too?
sum ppl r havin lots of coffee 2day breakin rules n sayin its stress n what hav u. i can do the beatin for u. but quit wrightin & stop doin this 2 urself; try salsa dancin or make porn films instead
9a7 lsaaanik!
really good!
dandoon: id hardly call the um3ali one a good poem :P
zizo: LOL wala 3ad it was her idea to post a poem :P oo thx for the compliment
CeCe: LOL madri 3ad itha id call myself a sha3ir bes i glad you think its gr8 =)
Deem: lol thanks
Scarlo: LOL yes it could be it could be =P a plate of balalee6 is definitley something that would inspire me to write a piece like this =P
3ad ana wain o a3arif ina its a bit shakespearean =P
Reem: Thanks =P wala 3ad ana mo ma5ith wayid 3ala writing poems bain fatra o fatra i come up with something =P bes yala inshala il keep it up =)
heath: lol i was bullied into posting this really. Hm salsa dancing you say? Well ima need a partner like you for that wont i ?
Aurora: Thaanks =)
ya salaaam :P
nice nice
iktib feeny shi3ir;p
Cr8ivia: Thanks =)
um-mit3ib: Awal shay post again o i9eer 5air :P
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