Tuesday, October 17, 2006

dooda's doodles

So the voting is finally over and well suprise suprise its a tie =P kint ba7u6 both bes gilt la ill pick one o 5ala9 mo li3ba =P I choose the one i wrote in class



Hate Me...

I see you withering in the dark, yet im helpless

I try, and so hard i tried, but still i lay helpless
way too helpless to turn that frown you wear,
way too helpless to dampen the pain you bear,
So hate me.

Hate me, for i dont deserve your loving eyes
Hate me, for not hugging you in your dark n lonely nights
Hate me, for being so helpless when you needed me the most.

I'll blame myself for all the pain and ill walk away
i'll walk away till your able to love again and i'll stay away
ill stay away for you..





so yea me first attempt at something a bit more serious than the first one, not that my love for um3ali wasn't serious, bes you knw what i mean.

Oh and for those who care, the poem was heavily influenced by the song Hate Me by Blue October and if you want you've got 7 days to download it =)

o ily yabii yigra ithanya it might pop up in a later post. Its more me though, bes ppl liked this more so meh. Oo last but not least ana 5ala9 a3lin my retirement min poetry =D

21 comments:

ScarlO said...

err .. shotgun ..?

ScarlO said...

oh, keep doodling, matey ..

ScarlO said...

yep, keep doodling ..

No3iK said...

looooooooooooool

la la shot gun!! ana gablich :p coz ive read it like a week ago ;p

anyways 7ason bason ,, babes ..
3geeba .// i like how u edited the last part .. amazing mashalah.

ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

stop being silly .. damik with no3ik ull never quit writing poetry..
coz no longer KAIFIK :P

glel al 7aya !

No3iK said...

heeeeeeeeey one more thingy

i luuuuuuuuuurrrrrv the pic!!

;)

do0da said...

Scarlo: il try, bes no promises =P

no3ik: mez glad you liked it =) , ha yala nazalna ilkitab =P

oo nadoy found the pic =P so her shotgun =P

a daydreamer: mez happy you loved it =) o inzain ok yala i wont quit il just take a break =P o uhwa fee one more that might be published b4 i quit, the one that lost the vote =P

F. said...

Thats deep man! Just great..
I'm waiting for the other one =)

Danah said...

Inta wain khash hal mawahib?! Anything else we don't know about?:p

do0da said...

Aurora: Thnx il try squeeze it in soon =P

dandoon: he3 he3 well i wasnt gonna let all that food Mr. Park used to have go to waste =P

FilmGirl: Thnx, oo ee us Geminis do rock xP

3alaina i so want to hate you, wala ka2na ur hating o 6af7a already =P

um-miT3ib said...

ur next poem should be about ur luv 7ag italians:P

Dakhtour said...

Meno hal ge63aaaaaaaaaaaa?!?!!?!!? :P

do0da said...

um-mit3ib: Italian models ok, bes 7ag ur italia ti6la3 shay mithil ily no3ik 7a6at-ha =P

Zizo: lol is2al scarlo ihya ilym6al3at-ha =P laa o hathi censored version ba3ad ;)

FilmGirl: Mashalla the comment was dripping with sincerity =P

um-miT3ib said...

ur jealous:P

do0da said...

um-mit3ib: 3ala shino, min zeenhum munta5bna a7san =P

um-miT3ib said...

one thing to reply : BOWAHAHAHAHAHHAHHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY :P

do0da said...

a daydreamer: loll ana i just came back to kuwait 7ag il3eed =P

um-mit3ib: yes im glad to see u agree munta5abna a7san =p

um-miT3ib said...

6al eb3ainhom montakhabna :P shyab ele yaab.. hatholy world cup holders wely 3indina if there is any cup their gonna hold its gonna be a coffee cup;p

do0da said...

um-mit3ib: they may have the world cup bes we have a CAMEL HA ! beat that if you can :r

il5aroof: 5ashmi's good so thats a compliment 7ag ilmunta5ab =P

Common_Sense said...

I haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate u ... chthy zain ;p ?

um-miT3ib said...

camel :P? jad wala:p? thatws ur arguement? a camel :p?

do0da said...

Common: LOL ee feelin much better :P

um-mit3ib: Haa 7adich 3ala our camel =P Shfee ka2s il3alam 7ata our Camel wadayna Ka2s il3alam sij ina he fertilized mal3abhum o zafona bes ham kilshay wila our camel !!