In the dark you left me,
flooding with pain.
I miss you dearly,
will you ever come around again?
i dare not betray you,
My love for you is all but weak.
The smile you give me is pure,
Its only your presence i seek.
UmAli, my bowl of eternal Happiness,
do come around again,
You knw you're always welcome
as a lover or as a friend.
It was only fair i write me first poem after food =P plus i just threw it in to break the serious poem vibe goin round.
Aint she something ;)
17 comments:
gun gun
bam bam
i liked the poem!!
new side of u i never thought was there ;)
impressive
althought the om 3ali dashat 3r`6
but i cant blame u can i!!
its om 3ali maaaaan ;)
Um3ali the sweet? haha :P
walla lik mustaqbal bil poetry , bs once i know 7ag meno its dircted ill have another opinion ;P
3awafi dooda=p
LOVELY :')
ma3 innah 3ala golat no3ik um 3ali madree ish mda5ilha 3ar9'
bas yallah it's okay ^^,
aaah i want um 3ali :(
havent had it like in months
a good title would be:
" Aint no sunshine when shes gone"
;p
i dont even know what that is :-s why why why cant you talk about something i know? potato pancakes or lgaimat mathalan...
loved the poem .. encore, love .. get published :-p
i dont even know what that is :-s why why why cant you talk about something i know? potato pancakes or lgaimat mathalan...
loved the poem .. encore, love .. get published :-p published :-p
lol sa7 ilsanik ;p
3ndek thoooQ hehe
Shakelha lazanya wallah ma chena om e3laiwy ;)
Nice poem dude.. 7arakaaaaaat ;)
No3ik: thank you =) oo lol 5o mayseer in6ali3 all the sides mara wa7da =P
oo that woulda been a good title bes 5ala9 ma tiswa a'3ayra half way thru =P
utmost: LOL shqa9dich ya3ni shino ilum3ali mo kafu a poem like this? :P
Nourah: i would share my um3ali with you, bes like me lil cuzin says "sharing is boring" and thats coming from a 4yr old =)
a daydreamer: Im still in shock at the fact you dont like um3ali, thats, thats BLASPHEMY! ..but that aside thanks for the compliment bes dont expect another poem ne time soon bes atwaqa3 ikoon fe wa7da thanya
Scarlo: lol intay send me some cookies this christmas o ill send you some um3ali shrayich =P ?
ne ways itha tabeehna potato pancakes aw lagaimat bes switch the word um3ali o tada ya3ni sij ina its the main theme but its hardly mentioned that much =P
oo itha tabeen an encore riday o update every now n then ba3dain i9eer 5air :P
Gercel: get a life, o if u were in any other place other than lyon this comment woulda been deleted. Bes alas i aint no homophobe so bleh one repeated comment cant really do me harm.
um mid3aab: Thank you Thank You, now 3almi these non-believers lol
Zizo: Ma5ith-ha min site it was suppossed to be temporary bes the person who i asked for a better pic forgot to take it! Ilmafrooth they took one by now bes dam ma ti7achaw ya3ni insa this lasanya is staying :P
Nice and simple poem. I will be asking you why and when you wrote that exactly ;p!
I AM HUNGRY!
Oh my God! I loved it...! You've got talent, I definately didn't see that coming...UM 3ALI :P
Beautiful!!!
lol
amot 3l copy paste ;p
dooda .. mn jaddik ya maaan mn jaddik
esawon copy paste 3shan 5a6r 3yonik ;)
`7`7`7`77`7`
FilmGirl: Its not that bad now is it =P?
CeCe: why: shino r u saying um3ali mo kafo poem =P when: wala kint imwa9i 3ala um3ali o waiting for it to arrive =P
Aurora: Thanks =)
No3ik: 3ashoon 3ayal B-) mo gayilich mo hayin =P
YUMMI YUMMI !!
about the UM3LI akeeeeeeeeeed LOVER !!!
tawni ga3da men il noum o ib 5a6ry shy sweet ,, o ana 3eshgy um 3ali .. so il zebda abi um 3ali plz
Honey: LOL ana bilyala ga3id adabir 7ag nafsi la o nikta youm finally dabart 7ag nafsi um3ali, ilyiran dazawlina ba3ad so i ended up with too much um3ali bes ya3ni im not complaining =P
3ad ma3qoola maku ma7al bilq8 ibee3 um3ali?? ya3ni they sell everything here, akeed fee a place with good um3ali!
well sometimes u find them bebofehat !!
my fave 1 malat il sheraton cuz ma y76oon feeha KESHMESH cuz i hate it
A daydreamer: True, True, but they say if u eat something like 16 times ull end up not hating it =P fa we can always "fix" ur taste (a)
Honey: ana al7een ga3id at7al6am laish may7i6oonli keshmesh o intay ma tabeena!! oo uhwa shino mayinba3 ila ib bufayhat ?! ya3ni i knw the Buffet ib SAS yam peacock have it or used to when i used to go there with my family awaaaaal :P bes ya3ni i cant really send the driver to iyeebli min buffet um3ali now can i? lol
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